Love and Lust are Both Disgust – Tin Man of Rust. – C/C?

Question by : Love and Lust are Both Disgust – Tin Man of Rust. – C/C?
It takes me 10 drinks before I feel a thing.
Then I don’t feel anything at all.
Just fall, into sleep, into a heap.
I leave thigh high pantihose on,
Long sleeve t-shirt too.
I awake and knew – it was not what I wanted to do.

Razor blades are expensive no matter what sex you are.
They still leave a scar.

Arms are soft, in the night – starlight
Scars are white. I delight. They’re alright.

There’s no-one here and justice is a blind seer.
Drunken lust – he knows not what he fights.
Evil demon falls to blinded blade with out rights.
The dead rise and that’s the secret of self despise.
To be or not to see,
That it would be better not – to rot.
And decay until ones dying day.

Written, smitten kitten – walks down the road.
Wearing Sunday Woad.
Feeling like a nematode.
Within his existential potata’ creata’…. ‘crater face’ displace
In all is vanity – I plan to see.

2nd last line: Slang and accent – Potata’, accent potato. Creata’ accent, creator. ‘crater face’ – Someone with acne.
I made a mistake – I should have put ‘to rot and decay… ect’ on the same line. Anyway…

I knew I didn’t want to start a line with Capital A for And, now I know why…
That was actually a big mistake…. but it doesn’t matter…. subject matter… lol
S3 L3 without instead of with out. Ether one is an acceptable convention, I think…
S3 L3 without instead of with out. Ether one is an acceptable convention, I think…

Best answer:

Answer by Gene B
This is so original, I’m speechless.
You write what you feel, you feel what you write.
I like this poem.

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4 Responses to “Love and Lust are Both Disgust – Tin Man of Rust. – C/C?”

  1. THE BANNIBAL ONE says:

    This actually put a smile on my face..I love this.
    A great depiction of how some live and love it.
    Here’s what I liked,
    The dead rise and that’s the secret of self despise.
    To be or not to see,
    That it would be better not – to rot.
    And decay until ones dying day.
    Some seem to take pleasure in rotting
    from the inside out,No doubt.
    Written smitten kitten..yeahhhhh!!!!!
    This is 9,,,mighty divine.
    Thanks,,sleep good.

  2. plıɥɔǝʌol says:

    No no no you forgot to say……that you are beautiful.

    Ifeel your presence like I do my dead daughters and you are alive. She lost her left eye at 4 months old, had cancer treatments for the othern eye for three years. WE BEAT IT!!! HOORAY!!! oh isn’t life great???!!

    NO IT IS NOT.

    Her father took her to KFC one night and stopped to do a shot of heroin. (I did not learn this until 2 days later when an ex of his called to snitch him out. I had been carrying guilt for thinking when they left that it was nice to have a moment to myself.) Wrecked the car. killed her. Killed my love for him. He was dead.
    I hit him and I hit him and I- well when I finally stopped my hands were shredded. My wrists already had self-inflictions. I get mad that I cannot have the luxury of suicidal ideation anymore…

    I was going to check out and I overdosed, She brought me back by saying, “Mommy, WHY did you do that? I was waiting for you…”

    Her name was Terra Stella. She was too good for me. Too good for this world.

    She sees you, too, through how I feel about you. You are someone uncommon and uncanny. You frighten me in some ways and comfort me in others. I am honored to know someone like you who does not live as a personification of ‘the dark poet’ yet knows and expresses VERY dark things so well.

    So guess what? You have to stick around until some outside force kills you. Don’t worry, I promise it will happen someday…

  3. GorgeousRobyn262Kitt3n5 says:

    The kitten does not would like piercings

  4. MyarComic1909 says:

    better undertake one there are numerous kitties in existence that require ones support


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